Stage 4Second Verse, Bridge, Demo Track, Critique from Nashville Pro.
In the second verse, I keep the story in the room with the grandson still speaking to the grandfather. Using "He said" in the first line of the lyric, just like in the first line of the first verse and chorus.
In the bridge, I decided to have the grandfather speak and then the final chorus would naturally flip back to the grandson.
I tried to use language in the second verse that a younger boy who wouldn't…Read more